While I was happy I was able to make something presentable for GGJ, I did want to clean up a few thing. This past few days have been some on and off editing, fixing grammar, adding jokes, and filling in some bits here and there. I even presented this to a therapist in order to get some feedback. 

I do want to add another scene that's a perspective flip with the girl. It would fix one of my own criticisms of the work looking back on it, that Mana is mostly a prop. Theres's definitely some opportunities to explore, even if it means making a bunch more assets ^^;

I also had someone offer their music to use, I like the track that I grabbed, but I admit they are mostly scratch tracks from free sources I grabbed spur of the moment.

I'm also debating painting the backgrounds more. I admit I do like the rough sketchiness to them, But I'm not sure what others think. I Kind of want to be done with this game after a week.

TBD: an ending splash screen, a new scene with the girl, maybe with a decision in there.